【帮忙给英语作文改错,附中文大意】

2025-05-22 03:36:18
推荐回答(3个)
回答1:

That day's weather (was) very good, (the sky was) clear and boundless. A city's high school (was holding) a ten thousand meter long-distance race competition. The B high school sent (a studendt called) TINA to (compete in this)competition. She (was confident and determined to be the champion). Because she is very fierce, moreover the condition (of that day was) also very good.
The (race) started. Tina (occupied) the leading position, she (felt the warm wind hitting her face), smelled (the delicate fragrance of the wind), the (blond) hair (fluttered) in the wind. She felt her condition (was) getting better and better, therefore she ran (faster and faster).
(In a) sudden, she fell down, moreover (her knee was badly injured). (It was too sore for her to stand straight). She (sat on the ground hopelessly), (watched other) contestant surpass her (in silence). By now, she (heard) (a) familiar sound. (It was her) best friend C(,) (who) (was) encouraging her (to carry on the race). She made an effort to stand. Although (she ran in a very slow pace), (yet) she was still insisting (on finish her race).
The competition's result (showed that)she (did) not (attain) the champion, (not)even (one of the) first three (places). (The reason was that) she (was the last competitor) (to reach) the end point. (However,) she (wasn't defeated psychologically), (at least in her mind) she (wasn't last). (That was because) some (of the) contestants ran up to (only) half (and gave up). C (congratulated her and said)“you (did very well), (I am very honoured and proud to be your friend.")

回答2:

我拷,什么鸟都有,作业也有这么大张旗鼓的求人做?是你学习还是别人学习?能不能有点骨气,自己的事儿自己做?别给中国的大学生丢人!!!更别做高分低能儿,都选修这科,人家怎么就自己能做,你差啥?
别人肯于帮你,你以为是为了你的破分啊,当钱花不?只是想帮你一下罢了.要求还不少,看不起你这种人.
顺便说一下,各位高手老师们,别惯这些人的破脾气,如果是想学习知识,帮帮他们,我们都跟着感动.若是再遇此类人到这片净土来要作业,帮没问题,多收钱,收他个千八百的,让他们长点教训,学生不学习?你们的任务是什么?悲哀!!!!!

回答3:

我同意shm66666的,你们啊~