英语小作文

1.开头那一句，中国的春节直接写the Spring Festival就可以了
2.because那一句，because后面的逗号去掉，in改为on
3.the adult那一句，adult加s；同理，expects去s
4.before那一句，the day应为the Spring Festival
5.we play那一句，play后加together，eat改为have
6.we are also那一句应为：We also wait for the New Year's Eve.
7.then那一句，will去掉，firecracker加s
8.最后一句话去掉

附：本人文章（仅供参考）

It is a very important festival in China. On that day, Children are full of joy because they can get presents and money from the parents and the relatives. Adults are happy to enjoy holidays with family and friends. People will do a lot of shopping. In the daytime, you can see the people are posting couplets on the both sides of their doors. In the evening, the children and adults get together to enjoy the food, after that they go out to light the firecrackers.