检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误

1. It is the capital city of China.
China c要大写

2.I want to climb up it firstly.或者用at first. 去掉to

3.Then I will visit the Forbidden City.故宫的英语是 the Imperial Palace.

4.If the is clear I will climb up to baita and see the whole park.
掉了主语，If the（） is clear I will climb up to baita and see the whole park.

5. The most famous place is the great wall.
Great Wall G,W大写

6. I think it would be a wonderful holiday
would改成will

文章写的不错！

capital city 不要city capital 本来就是首都的意

思 加了City 反而多次一举

There are a lot of famous and interesting places

改成 There are many places of interest （名胜古迹）
I want to climb up to it first 改成

I want to climb it up 代词要放在动词和介词

中间

If the is clear 改为 If there is clean

clear是清晰的意思 clean 是干净

climb up to baita 去掉 to

I think it would be a wonderful holiday

不能用would would是过去将来时

这里应用 will 一般将来时

China ,大写
Great Wall，大写
I want to climb up to it first. 去掉to
Bei Hai Park ,大写p
If the weather is clear I will climb up to baita and see the whole park. 加上weather

没有单词拼写错误，不过有一处要改
if the is clear,应该为if it is clear.